Poem: Spider Hoodlums

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This is my favorite of the two you did. -Really creative!

Personally, I don't really care for Haiku... I guess 'cause they're too short. This style is more my speed.

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[So Great]...I LOVE IT... it paints such a wonderful, complete picture. I might want to illustrate this poem if you would allow it? :-D Pretty please... 8 times...
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what a visual. i love it. i have always thought of spiders as female before this. good job.
That was cool. Now I don't I think that I can look at spiders the same way anymore.

I might want to illustrate this poem if you would allow it?

I would love it if you would illustrate it. :->

Why, Tink, did you want the poor lonely lady spiders to not have any company? Of course there are boy spiders.

This poem is inspired by the big, tough looking spiders in my house that are so unintimidated that they don't even try to get away from me before I squash them. One actually took the newspaper away from me and hit me back last week.

i'm never coming to your house then. black spider phobia.

actually, if lady spiders are at all like lady humans, i'm sure they could find a way to not be so lonely without the help of any boy spiders.

(grin)

all spiders are born bisexual. didn't u know that?
Was not aware of that. ::smirk::
Fun! I don't think I'll look at spiders the same way again.

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